ZetaAspect's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{SD} - Tempest]

Sounds nice, but it needs more overall movement.

Nice reversed intro. You're really fond of that lead synth. The melody is very nice. I think the rave synth really lacks power in this song. I like to use those kind of supersaws as huge leads, but you're using is as a sort of backdrop, so it's a bit weird for me. The beat is kinda underwhelming, too, although it's technically competent, with everything mixed nicely (including non-percussion instruments, for that matter). Hmm...I don't know why I'm so skeptical of this song. The piano is okay, but I'm not sure it works perfectly against the lead synth part. Also, the lack of variation in the underlying melody makes this song pretty dull, excepting the key change at 1:36 followed by the nice section with a new melody at 1:50. That was a good change. The piano part against it sounds pretty good at first, especially on the high notes, although towards the end of the melody, as the supersaws are fading back in, it feels like a melodic stretch to me. That supersaw line really irks me, by the way. Not enough variation, and it overrides the variation in the melodies, which isn't actually all that much, come to think of it. Sorry for such a critical review. Still though, it sounds pretty good, although it really needs more movement. Keep it up!

ShirkDeio responds:

Thanks, critical is good if I know that the person is sincere =p. I will keep your advice in mind when I work on my new stuff.

[{SD} - Dark Memories]

Good job on the melodies. Strong mood. 7.5/10

While the overall flow of the piece is a bit flat, the structure is solid, and the melodies are nice. Good job on the piano melody; I like it, although there's something wrong with the bit that plays at 0:10 where it goes high (and every subsequent time that melody is used, of course). I'm not too fond of the synth lead, but the melody is good (although it doesn't quite work against the piano all the time). It could have used a few more flourishes. I'm thinking high notes. Then again, I have a tendency to find little things to add to other people's songs. The flourishes you had were nice. I liked the really fast string of notes at 1:01 or so. 16th note triplets? The beat is constant and driving throughout. It could use a better kick sample, and that hats are on the loud side. Overall, though, this is a neat song. Good job. Oh, where's that final note? I love that decelerando at the end, but I feel there should be one more note tagged onto the end. I'm too lazy to find out what note exactly it is, but it's the same note that starts the song. Oh well, good job. Later!

ShirkDeio responds:

Thanks, man. I may remix this, now that I know a bit more about making music. Samples weren't so great in this one. Thanks for the input!

[{SD} - Dream Sword]

Sweet.

Nice opening synth. The kicks got this nice thunderous sound to it, but it sounds like it's getting drowned out. Bringing out the kick would do a lot for this song. This song could use a pad playing backing chords or something. You bring in a lead synth at 0:27 that I initially didn't like, although the melody was decent. The synth has grown on me a bit. I think you need to change up the chord progression, because the song doesn't seem to go anywhere until the key change, which I thought was awesome, especially because everything comes back in full-force. I like the new melody for the end that starts at 2:00, although it doesn't always work against the other melodies. Anyways, overall, this is pretty good. You've certainly become a better producer since I last heard a song of yours. I'll listen to some more of your songs (including "Tempest," of course). Later!

ShirkDeio responds:

Thanks. The input it good, the thoughts are good, and I will try to get a better lead synth @.@